This is awesome .... 👌😘😘😍
I am eagerly waiting for the part-2 ...
Its cute and simple... I like the silent character"rain" in this Story. Good job priyanka
Wow!!! Priyanka, u really did an excellent job.
I felt each n every scene as if it was happening before me, as if I'm the rain who witnessed the whole story from the clouds, as if its a movie (morning raga).
I felt the culture, love, fantacy and warmth of your deep writing style.
Sorry for long comment.
All the best...
Thank you Nikhil.. I felt to choose some other narrator than the characters of the story, finally thought the rain will be of different style as it enters the sceen of story to fulfill the natural sense.
Firstly kudos! Wonderful story. Highly unpredictable and perhaps one of the best stories I have read in this blog since a long time.
full marks for the attention to detail......emotions carried out in the perfect fashion,,,
,,,nice work buddy.....LOVED IT....5/5 again.....ending was exquisite.....
Well written. Good story and quite a good tempo in the story line. Liked the ending. It did not go the way things were planned that is the best part.
Yeah, the ending is quite unexpected,
But she left that for our limits of imagination. Haha...☺
Yeah to your imagination.